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Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

i loved this piece. i love how you portray the harshness behind the spectacle, and how these spaces of fun, sparkles, and dance often hide very intricate, bitter stories. well done 🖤

N. A. Strathdee's avatar

Thank you so much Eugenia! Your words mean more than you know x

Nick Hills's avatar

"He would say anything, just to watch those crinkles appear at the edges of her eyes."

what a wonderful piece Nicole, have a great day!

N. A. Strathdee's avatar

Thank you as always Nick! I hope you have a wonderful day as well x

Elizabeth M's avatar

Fantastic writing. Placed me right there as a silent, invisible observer.

N. A. Strathdee's avatar

That’s what all writers hope to achieve, thank you so much for your kind words x it means more than you know

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Lovely piece! 🤩 I felt I was right there at the Moulin Rouge 💃

N. A. Strathdee's avatar

Aww thank you Ricardo!

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

I loved it 😊